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October 3, 2008

Today two people and I talked in the chat room.

Because my English is not well,

I only said some basic question and answers.

I will work hard to improve my English.

I hope everyone is happy, when I chat with everyone.

Nice to meet you, my friend.

Thank you to help me,Kyle A.

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07:08 AM Oct 04 2008
Lady_888 Azerbaijan	hi.how are you .I want with your friend.because I am also improve my english .Let we help each other

07:08 AM Oct 04 2008

Lady_888
Azerbaijan

hi.how are you .I want with your friend.because I am also improve my english .Let we help each other

12:52 AM Oct 04 2008
Kyle A United States	I can edit if you want. ^_^ Just some small changes. "Today two people and I talked in the chat room. Because my English is not well, I only said some basic question and answers. I will work hard to improve my English. I hope everyone is happy, when I chat with everyone. Nice to meet you, my friend. If there is a wrong sentence in my article, please tell me! Thanks！" When you make a list of people including yourself you put yourself last. Then there was some words in present tense when you were talking about the past. There were a couple other small changes too.

12:52 AM Oct 04 2008

Kyle A
United States

I can edit if you want. ^_^ Just some small changes.

"Today two people and I talked in the chat room.

Because my English is not well,

I only said some basic question and answers.

I will work hard to improve my English.

I hope everyone is happy, when I chat with everyone.

Nice to meet you, my friend.

If there is a wrong sentence in my article, please tell me!

Thanks！"

When you make a list of people including yourself you put yourself last. Then there was some words in present tense when you were talking about the past. There were a couple other small changes too.